needed changes in story about the dog named Bibi being saved in water

i made some mistakes in my first and earlier posting here in this blog, i got a few facts wrong or mixed by mistake and i plan to get all the facts in the dog named Bibi being saved by Raden Soemawinata who was the person who jumped into the sea, to rescue and save the dog named -
-Bibi, who is owned by someone named Sue Drummond, who lives in Melbourine,Austria.